Second Writing Center Observations

This Observation session was much better then the first one. this tutor was very nice and supportive. The student brought the assignment requirements and they started to read her paper, she underlined ideas and fixed her sentence structure. The students paper was all over the place and didn't have good organizations skills with her writing. So the tutor helped a lot with that. The student wrote down everything that the tutor said. She also looked very satisfied. Although I feel like the tutor paid too much attention on the grammar, and didn't focus on the rest of the assignment that she had, this relates to Low-order concerns, because the tutor just fixed grammar and sentence structure and nothing else for the paper. The tutor finished the session earlier then what she expected. I look forward to the next two sessions.